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Cross-Road-in-China

发布时间：2012-12-31 14:49:56 作者：庞粟  发布者：pangsu 浏览次数：3023  类别：英文作文  

Whoever sees this cartoon can not help thinking deeply. The people who

Prepare to cross the road next to zebra crossing contain the old, the week, the disabled, children, and the like .They squat down on the ground in order as the athletes are ready for the off. Meanwhile, the traffic police man says that green time has five seconds, everybody get set. It goes without saying that the drawing aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China. And I think the purpose of the drawing is to show us that the moral quality of people gradually decreased.

  The reasons for this prevalent phenomenon, I think, have three. In the first place, with the development of the society and improvement of the people’s living standards, more and more people have their private cars. And with the increasing pace of the modern life, people are busy with work. These lead to the traffic jam. In addition, related departments do not have reasonable rules and do not solve the conflict between traffic and safety.  Last but not least, people have grown selfish and unconcerned about others. They do not know that modesty is important for .The important reason, I think, is the lack of the morality.

  A wise man once said that the one thing necessary for the society is morality. Not only \should we improve our morality quality, but also the whole society should work together to create a wonderful life.

 

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  Whoever sees this cartoon can not help thinking deeply. The people who

  Prepare to cross the road next to zebra crossing contain the old, the week, the disabled, children, and the like .They squat down on the ground in order as the athletes are ready for the off. Meanwhile, the traffic police man says that green time has five seconds, everybody get set. It goes without saying that the drawing aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China. And I think the purpose of the drawing is to show us that the moral quality of people gradually decreased.

    The reasons for this prevalent phenomenon, I think, have three. In the first place, with the development of the society and improvement of the people’s living standards, more and more people have their private cars. And with the increasing pace of the modern life, people are busy with work. These lead to the traffic jam. In addition, related departments do not have reasonable rules and do not solve the conflict between traffic and safety.  Last but not least, people have grown selfish and unconcerned about others. They do not know that modesty is important for .The important reason, I think, is the lack of the morality.

    A wise man once said that the one thing necessary for the society is morality. Not only \should we improve our morality quality, but also the whole society should work together to create a wonderful life.

   点评：这是一个看图作文题目，没有图片，无法判定。且文章字体大小不一，下划线很多，应付嫌疑较浓，不予评判。