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发布时间：2014-02-14 18:37:18 作者：俞湾  发布者：future 浏览次数：2749  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

Students Wanted for Summer Camp

Boys and girs（12-16）

Are you goo with children?

Happy Kids Summer Camp needs help with:

sports,music and English

Come and join us!

Send your information to hksc@163.com

假设你叫李小玲，想参加这个夏令营。清发一封电子邮件，介绍一下你的个人情况、兴趣爱好及能力。

 

Dear sir,

    My name is Li Xiaoling.I want to join Summer Camp.I am at the age of 13.I am a student of No.3 Middle School.I have many hobbies——playing  the guitar,drawing and playing the computer games. I can swim and play the violin.I am good at English.And I think I am good with children.So I can help them with sports,music and English.

   I hope to get your letter soon!

                                                                                                                                       Yours,

                                                                                                                                        Li Xiaolian

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  Students Wanted for Summer Camp

  Boys and girs（12-16）

  Are you goo with children?

  Happy Kids Summer Camp needs help with:

  sports,music and English

  Come and join us!

  Send your information to hksc@163.com

  假设你叫李小玲，想参加这个夏令营。清发一封电子邮件，介绍一下你的个人情况、兴趣爱好及能力。

  
  

  Dear sir,

  My name is Li Xiaoling.I want to join Summer Camp.I am at the age of 13.I am a student of No.3 Middle School.I have many hobbies——playing  the guitar,drawing and playing the computer games. I can swim and play the violin.I am good at English.And I think I am good with (friendly to) children.So I can help them with sports,music and English.

  I hope to get your letter soon!

  Yours,

  Li Xiaolian