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Be praised by teacher

发布时间：2015-07-14 19:20:33 作者：颜廷毅  发布者：qfyty 浏览次数：3609  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

  As a student,i can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.

  The other day,we had an exam on the history class.To be honest, I didn't like history at all.I though it's boring.But to my surprise,I became the only student in our class who had no mistake this time!My history teacher was very glad and praised me before my classmates!I was not a good student,it was the first time that I was praised!I felt so happy that I even couldn't brath!

  Since then, I discoveried that Ihad a gift for learning history.I began to fall in love with history and did better and betteer.Now,history has become my favorite subject.

• 批改教师：汤超然 ( 云南省 >> 昆明市 >> 西山区 )
  批改时间：2019/7/31 9:50:21
  点评指数：★★
  点评内容：
  

  As a student,i can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before（right before） my classmates.

  The other day,we had an exam on the history class.To be honest, I didn't like history at all.I though（thought） it's boring.But to my surprise,I became the only student in our class who had no mistake this time!My history teacher was very glad and praised me before my classmates!I was not a good student,it was the first time that I was praised!I felt so happy that I even couldn't brath!(???)

  Since then, I discoveried that Ihad a gift for learning history.I began to fall in love with history and did better and betteer.Now,history has become my favorite subject.

  点评：本文切合题意，结构清晰，思想健康，但叙事技巧不够，可读性不强，可确定为二类中作文，最终得分：17分（满分25分）