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the purpose GO TO UNIVERSITY
发布时间:2016-03-13 17:08:20 作者:  发布者:12345654321 浏览次数:2900  类别:英文作文  
[高中三年级]


I do agree the opinions of the writer's which are about the purpose of going to university. We can learn that we go to university not for technical training of our career, but for the emotions in the spiritual resources of mankind. It can be seen easily that the main purpose of university to put students in touch with the best civilizations the human race has created.      

Some people take it for granted that they go to university just for a degree. There is no doubt that they will find a job easily with a diploma to raise their families and make more money. But they really neglected the fact that the process of our whole life not only do we need a job, but also we need nutrition to make life colorful and vivid.

Personally, my attitude for the purpose of going to university is positive, with reasons as follows . Firstly, acquiring knowledge and skills to make each day count. It is commonly believed that from university not only should we received professional skills, but to widen our horizons and set a sense of responsibility. Moreover, what makes us human beings different from animals is that we are able to formulate ideas such as love, freedom and equality. In essence, education plays an important role in our history. Last but not lest, students enroll the university for both training and education. Only in this way can we spend a college life like the words what the author  said we go to college rather than college go through us--with making contact, and we will have being in college.

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