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发布时间：2012-12-26 23:45:00 作者：吴美君  发布者：11131sun 浏览次数：2665  类别：中文作文  

I am sun ting from class2 and I am the class leadership who is always extraordinary conscientious in the study.

Actually, English is one of my favorite subjects , since the start of the academic year, I have devoted myself wholeheartedly to learning profession English .With my passion and what I have acquired in profession English classes, I reckon that I am the one that can apply for the exemption eligibility of a professional English course.

Everyday, I am on schedule for professional English learning .Regardless of class or after school, I actively participate in any activities of English, from which I not only experience the fun of learning English but also improve the standard of my English. In particular, I want to thank my profession English teacher---Mrs. Zhang, who teaches from heart, not from the book.

Meanwhile, I realize that this campaign is extremely fierce. If I am lucky enough to be my teacher recognized, I will not live up to the teacher’expectation and will continue to indulge myself in learning profession English. However, If there is no success, I also believe that I am the best one who can highlight my own strength in following English examination.

 

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  I am sun ting （注意，这是人名，首字母要大写）from class2 （班级的首字母要大写）and I am the class leadership （-ship在英语中是个后缀，表示某种关系，某种能力，表示人，用leader就可）who is always extraordinary conscientious in the study.

  Actually, English is one of my favorite subjects , since the start of the academic year,（中式英语，用semaster，表示“一学年”） I have devoted myself  ^into (固定搭配）whole  heartedly to learning profession （此处用形容词professional）English .With my passion and what I have acquired in profession （此处用形容词professional）English classes, I reckon that I am the one that can apply for the exemption eligibility of a professional English course.（就怎么多错误，真能胜任吗？）

  Everyday, I am on schedule for professional English learning .Regardless of ^{being in} class （表示“在课上”）or after school, I actively participate in any （不如用every）activities of English, from which I not only experience the fun of learning English but also improve the standard （个人的水平用level一词）of my English. In particular, I want to thank my profession （此处用形容词professional）English teacher---Mrs. Zhang, who teaches from ^her heart, not from the book.

  Meanwhile, I realize that this campaign is extremely fierce. If I am lucky enough to be my teacher recognized, （所指何物？）I will not live up to the teacher’expectation and will continue to indulge myself in learning profession English. However, If there is no success,（success是名词，用形容词successful） I also believe that I am the best one who can highlight my own strength in following English examination.